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:Rustling of the purple curtain
 
:Rustling of the purple curtain
 
:Thrilled me, filled me
 
:Thrilled me, filled me
:With fantastic terror as never felt before
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:With fantastic terrors never felt before
 
:So that now, oh wind, stop breathing
 
:So that now, oh wind, stop breathing
 
:Hoping yet to calm my breathing
 
:Hoping yet to calm my breathing
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:Some lost visitor entreating
 
:Some lost visitor entreating
 
:Entrance at my chamber door
 
:Entrance at my chamber door
:That it is, and nothing more."
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:This is it, and nothing more."
  
 
:Deep into the darkness peering
 
:Deep into the darkness peering
 
:Long I stood there
 
:Long I stood there
:Wondering fearing  
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:Wondering, fearing ,
:Doubting dreaming fantasies
+
:Doubting, dreaming fantasies
:No mortal dared to dream before
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:No mortal dared to dream before,
 
:But the silence was unbroken
 
:But the silence was unbroken
 
:And the stillness gave no token
 
:And the stillness gave no token
 
:And the only word there spoken  
 
:And the only word there spoken  
:Was the whispered name, "Lenore?."
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:Was the whispered name, "Lenore?".
 
:This I thought
 
:This I thought
 
:And out loud whispered from my lips
 
:And out loud whispered from my lips
 
:The foul name festered
 
:The foul name festered
:Echoing itself
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:Echoing itself,
:Merely this, and nothing more
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:Merely this, and nothing more.
  
 
:Back into my chamber turning  
 
:Back into my chamber turning  
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:Somewhat louder than before
 
:Somewhat louder than before
 
:"Surely", said I  
 
:"Surely", said I  
:"Surely that is something at the iron staircase."
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:"Surely that is something at my iron staircase."
:Open the door to see what the threat is
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:Open the door to see what (the) threat is
 
:Open the window, free the shutters
 
:Open the window, free the shutters
 
:Let us this mystery explore
 
:Let us this mystery explore
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:Just one epithet I muttered as inside
 
:Just one epithet I muttered as inside
 
:I gagged and shuddered
 
:I gagged and shuddered
:When with a manly flirt and flutter
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:When with manly flirt and flutter
 
:In there flew a stately raven
 
:In there flew a stately raven
 
:Sleek and ravenous as any foe
 
:Sleek and ravenous as any foe
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:Nothing more.
 
:Nothing more.
  
:Askance, askew
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:Askance, askew,
:The self's sad fancy smiles at you I swear  
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:The self's said fancy smiles at you I swear  
 
:At this savage vicious countenance it wears
 
:At this savage vicious countenance it wears
 
:Though you show here shorn and shaven
 
:Though you show here shorn and shaven
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:Ghastly grim and ancient Raven
 
:Ghastly grim and ancient Raven
 
:Wandering from the opiate shores
 
:Wandering from the opiate shores
:Tell me tell me tell me
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:Tell me what thy lordly name is
:What thy lordly name is
 
 
:That you are not nightmare sewage
 
:That you are not nightmare sewage
:Some dire power drink or inhalation
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:Some dire powder drink or inhalation
:Framed from the flames of downtown lore
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:Framed from flames of downtown lore
 +
:Quoth the raven, "Nevermore!"
  
 
:And the raven, sitting lonely
 
:And the raven, sitting lonely
 
:Staring sickly at my male sex only
 
:Staring sickly at my male sex only
:That one word
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:That one word as if his soul
:As if in his soul and that one word
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:And in that one word
 
:He did outpour, "pathetic."
 
:He did outpour, "pathetic."
:Nothing further than he uttered
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:"Nothing farther" then he uttered
 
:Not a feather then he fluttered
 
:Not a feather then he fluttered
 
:Till finally was I that muttered  
 
:Till finally was I that muttered  
 
:As I stared dully at the floor
 
:As I stared dully at the floor
:"Look you, other friends have flown and left me
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:Other friends have flown and left me
 
:Flown as each and every hope has flown before
 
:Flown as each and every hope has flown before
 
:And as you no doubt will, before tomorrow."
 
:And as you no doubt will, before tomorrow."
 +
:but the bird said "nevermore".
  
 
:But then I felt the air grow denser
 
:But then I felt the air grow denser
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:When in fact I felt collusion
 
:When in fact I felt collusion
 
:Before the guise of false memories
 
:Before the guise of false memories
:Respite respite respite
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:Respite. Respite
 
:Through the haze of cocaine's glory
 
:Through the haze of cocaine's glory
:I smoke and I smoke the blue vial's glory
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:I smoke and smoke the blue vial's glory
:To forget
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:To forget at once the base Lenore.
:At once
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:Quoth the raven, "Nevermore".
:The base Lenore
 
  
 
:"Prophet", said I, "thing of evil
 
:"Prophet", said I, "thing of evil
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:Tell this soul with sorrow laden
 
:Tell this soul with sorrow laden
 
:Willful and destructive intent
 
:Willful and destructive intent
:Tell me, tell me how had lapsed a pure  
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:How had lapsed a pure  
 
:Heart lady to the greediest of needs?
 
:Heart lady to the greediest of needs?
:Sweaty arrogant dickless liar
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:Sweaty, arrogant, dickless liar
 
:Who has ascribed to nothing higher
 
:Who has ascribed to nothing higher
 
:Than a jab from a prick to a needle
 
:Than a jab from a prick to a needle
 
:Straight to betrayal and disgrace
 
:Straight to betrayal and disgrace
:A conscience showing not a trace?"
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:The conscience showing not a trace?"
 +
:Quoth the raven "Nevermore!"
  
:"Be that word, our sign of parting
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:"Be that word our sign of parting
 
:Bird or fiend," I yelled upstarting
 
:Bird or fiend," I yelled upstarting
 
:"Get thee back into the tempest
 
:"Get thee back into the tempest
:And the smoke filled bottle's shore
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:into the smoke-filled bottle's shore
 
:Leave no black plume as a token
 
:Leave no black plume as a token
 
:Of the slime thy soul has spoken
 
:Of the slime thy soul has spoken
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:Take the talon from my heart
 
:Take the talon from my heart
 
:And see that I can care no more
 
:And see that I can care no more
:Whatever matter came before
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:Whatever mattered came before
 
:I vanish with the dead Lenore."
 
:I vanish with the dead Lenore."
 +
:Quoth the raven "Nevermore!"
  
 
:But the raven, never flitting
 
:But the raven, never flitting
 
:Still is sitting silent sitting
 
:Still is sitting silent sitting
:Above a painting a silent painting  
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:Above a painting silent painting  
:Of the forever silenced whore
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:Of a forever silenced whore
:And his eyes have all the seemings
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:And his eyes have all the seeming
 
:Of a demon that is dreaming
 
:Of a demon that is dreaming
 
:And the lamplight over him streaming
 
:And the lamplight over him streaming

Revision as of 22:24, 11 August 2020

"The Raven", Edgar Allen Poe (1845), revisited by Lou Reed (2003)


Once upon a midnight dreary
As I pondered, weak and weary
Over many a quaint and curious
Volume of forgotten lore
While I nodded, nearly napping
Suddenly there came a tapping
As of someone gently rapping
Rapping at my chamber door
"Tis some visitor", I muttered.
"Tapping at my chamber door
Only this and nothing more.
Muttering I got up weakly
always have had trouble sleeping
Stumbling upright my mind racing
Furtive thoughts flowing once more
I there, hoping for some sunrise
Happiness would be a surprise
Loneliness no longer a prize
Rapping at my chamber door
Seeking out the clever bore
Lost in dreams forever more
Only this and nothing more.
Hovering my pulse was racing
Stale tobacco my lips tasting
Scotch sitting upon my basin
Remnants of the night before
Came again
Infernal tapping on the door
In my mind jabbing
Is it in or outside rapping
Calling out to me once more
The fit and the fury of Lenore
Nameless here forever more
And the silken sad uncertain
Rustling of the purple curtain
Thrilled me, filled me
With fantastic terrors never felt before
So that now, oh wind, stop breathing
Hoping yet to calm my breathing
"Tis some visitor entreating
Entrance at my chamber door
Some lost visitor entreating
Entrance at my chamber door
This is it, and nothing more."
Deep into the darkness peering
Long I stood there
Wondering, fearing ,
Doubting, dreaming fantasies
No mortal dared to dream before,
But the silence was unbroken
And the stillness gave no token
And the only word there spoken
Was the whispered name, "Lenore?".
This I thought
And out loud whispered from my lips
The foul name festered
Echoing itself,
Merely this, and nothing more.
Back into my chamber turning
Every nerve within me burning
When once again I heard a tapping
Somewhat louder than before
"Surely", said I
"Surely that is something at my iron staircase."
Open the door to see what (the) threat is
Open the window, free the shutters
Let us this mystery explore
"Oh bursting heart be still this once
Let's this mystery explore
It's the wind, it's the wind
And nothing more."
Just one epithet I muttered as inside
I gagged and shuddered
When with manly flirt and flutter
In there flew a stately raven
Sleek and ravenous as any foe
Not the least obeisance made he
Not a minutes gesture towards me
Of recognition or politeness
But perched above my chamber door
This foul and salivating visage
Insinuating with its knowledge
Perched above my chamber door
Silent sat and staring
Nothing more.
Askance, askew,
The self's said fancy smiles at you I swear
At this savage vicious countenance it wears
Though you show here shorn and shaven
I admit myself forlorn and craven
Ghastly grim and ancient Raven
Wandering from the opiate shores
Tell me what thy lordly name is
That you are not nightmare sewage
Some dire powder drink or inhalation
Framed from flames of downtown lore
Quoth the raven, "Nevermore!"
And the raven, sitting lonely
Staring sickly at my male sex only
That one word as if his soul
And in that one word
He did outpour, "pathetic."
"Nothing farther" then he uttered
Not a feather then he fluttered
Till finally was I that muttered
As I stared dully at the floor
Other friends have flown and left me
Flown as each and every hope has flown before
And as you no doubt will, before tomorrow."
but the bird said "nevermore".
But then I felt the air grow denser
Perfumed from some unseen incense
As though accepting angelic intrusion
When in fact I felt collusion
Before the guise of false memories
Respite. Respite
Through the haze of cocaine's glory
I smoke and smoke the blue vial's glory
To forget at once the base Lenore.
Quoth the raven, "Nevermore".
"Prophet", said I, "thing of evil
Prophet still, if a bird or devil
By that heaven that bends above us
By that God we both ignore
Tell this soul with sorrow laden
Willful and destructive intent
How had lapsed a pure
Heart lady to the greediest of needs?
Sweaty, arrogant, dickless liar
Who has ascribed to nothing higher
Than a jab from a prick to a needle
Straight to betrayal and disgrace
The conscience showing not a trace?"
Quoth the raven "Nevermore!"
"Be that word our sign of parting
Bird or fiend," I yelled upstarting
"Get thee back into the tempest
into the smoke-filled bottle's shore
Leave no black plume as a token
Of the slime thy soul has spoken
Leave my loneliness unbroken
Quit as those have quit before
Take the talon from my heart
And see that I can care no more
Whatever mattered came before
I vanish with the dead Lenore."
Quoth the raven "Nevermore!"
But the raven, never flitting
Still is sitting silent sitting
Above a painting silent painting
Of a forever silenced whore
And his eyes have all the seeming
Of a demon that is dreaming
And the lamplight over him streaming
Throws his shadow to the floor
I love she who hates me more
I love she who hates me more
And my soul shall not be lifted from that shadow
Nevermore

Poe's text,